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evomx5
Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 52
Atlanta, GA

0 posted 2005-07-28 10:20 AM

Ponder not, what might have been
While aging shadows creep within
Sing ye not, the dirges, sad
As life for thee can still be had

For from the dusty rooms of past
Where cold winds blow and fires blast
Bring the heart back to the soul
From whence the body lost control

Fix the eye’s determined stare
Upon the lady, soft and fair
Offer up what’s now been found
Lay thy love onto the ground

Take a bold and daring stance
And dance with her a loving dance
That she will ne’er recover soon
For it will make her poor heart swoon

And she will e’er be in thy spell
Until the tolling of the bell
That brings thee back to God’s embrace
And lights a candle in the place

A place of honor in her heart
A place where thee will ne’er depart
Thy love for her will always be
The fondest of her memory

So ponder not what might have been
Look ahead without chagrin
Sing ye not, the dirges, sad
As life for thee can still be had.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-07-28 10:24 AM

oh...darn..
I'm keeping this one,
for many reasons....*s*

beautiful writing!

I refuse to make plans past this moment in time....

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-07-28 12:02 PM

"Ponder not, what might have been
While aging shadows creep within
Sing ye not, the dirges, sad
As life for thee can still be had

For from the dusty rooms of past
Where cold winds blow and fires blast
Bring the heart back to the soul"

loved this.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-07-28 06:09 PM

I wrote of a dirge,
once...
but not as well
as this.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-07-28 07:00 PM

evomx5
Very believable, well done.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2005-07-29 12:57 PM

Ponder not, what might have been
While aging shadows creep within

Ah, the struggle to let go of the past...one many of us have lived through. I like the way this is written in the olde English style.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2005-07-29 01:12 AM

"So ponder not what might have been
Look ahead without chagrin"

GREAT ATTITUDE!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2005-07-29 05:19 PM

just lovely~~

M

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2005-07-29 05:28 PM

This is well done my friend

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

9 posted 2005-07-30 06:18 AM

So very beautiful... it flows perfectly, and even more then that, the message is awesome. Great job!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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