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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-07-28 07:24 AM


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Lost to the Stars

To stars that diamond up above
I need the lust of Van Gogh’s love
Colors of Renoir’s detailed thrust
Without Picasso’s holocaust

A touch of dotted Surat’s din
A scene that grabs and draws you in
A palette dripping vibrant hue
That shows a world of painted new.

A canvas full of optic flow
A painting full of primal glow
That makes you care and come aware
That holds you still and makes you stare.

It is a wish and not a dream
A palette full of painters scheme
All painted with desires brush
And stroked with magic of its lush.

But alas it will not cast, for
The hourglass draws near the last.

© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-07-28 07:27 AM


To stars that diamond up above
I need the lust of Van Gogh’s love
Colors of Renoir’s detailed thrust
Without Picasso’s holocaust


an hour may be a lifetime, and you sir, gift my febal brain, with many lifetimes...and oh, by the way, you got all the lust, colors and detailed thrusts and more!!!!!!!

Hugs and good morning...

ice
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2 posted 2005-07-28 07:55 AM


"
A canvas full of optic flow
A painting full of primal glow
That makes you care and come aware
That holds you still and makes you stare."

This is like tuning in to an easy listening radio station, nice music, Seemore...

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scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2005-07-28 08:52 AM


Your palette of words created wonderful images on this morning's canvas Sy.  Well done indeed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

yv
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4 posted 2005-07-28 09:01 AM


Brilliant.  I could...feel each image.  Beautiful!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-07-28 09:34 AM


Wonderful wonderful Sy..
You couldn't have choosen a more beautiful
piece for a repost.
I absolutely love this one!
Have a prace-filled day.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

vandana
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6 posted 2005-07-28 10:29 AM


good read
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-07-28 10:37 AM


A canvas full of optic flow
A painting full of primal glow
That makes you care and come aware
That holds you still and makes you stare.


Excellent m'friend....

suthern
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8 posted 2005-07-28 03:20 PM


This is one of your most beautiful, my friend...
Martie
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9 posted 2005-07-28 04:06 PM


Sy

"It is a wish and not a dream
A palette full of painters scheme
All painted with desires brush
And stroked with magic of its lush."

and, you do it every time!!

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