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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-07-28 02:48 AM

Tip-toeing
Through the dark
The room is so big
The corners are out of sight
And I can't even see the ceiling

Statues of pillars of salt keep me company
And they stare at me
Blank, yet longing
Some part of me so interesting
The eyes of death stare
Shoe strings dangling from their faces
And I want to walk on their necks
Weakness

Double my desire
Righteousness over my heart
Brainless sense of violence
A spray of blood
Leaving this place...

Rattling shake
The scent of fear
Punishment for ignorance
Ignored

Where am I?
How did I get in here?
Why is everything so far away
The trip wire of a bad decision

His hand is bigger than all of this
Surely he'll break this from me
My bizzare atmosphere
I won't choke here
I won't crack

His hands like a scoop
Or a loose rope with a knot I can grab on to
I'll leave here

Only fruit of poured from a lie
Even so her weapons will not destroy me

Escape from the mistress' deception

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

1 posted 2005-07-28 09:06 AM

Wow...you honestly and truly have a profound mastery of words. I enjoyed this piece...very elegant!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-07-29 01:39 AM

Wow, honestly I expected criticism. Thank you. What does "Yv" stand for or is it something?

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-07-29 03:28 AM

and you place me in the path of Medusa herself?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-07-29 03:36 AM

"The eyes of death stare
Shoe strings dangling from their faces
And I want to walk on their necks"

hmmm
stuck between here and nowhere
a daliesque scene

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2005-07-29 05:40 PM

littlewing- Yes Medusa truly. She isn't a trustworthy one. So it seems.

Midnitesun- stuck between here and where? What does daliesque mean? I don't have a dictionary nearby.

Thank you.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

6 posted 2005-09-06 07:35 PM

Sorry...I'm a bit late with the reply...but Yv is actually part of my name!!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2005-09-07 02:09 AM

Ah haa, like Yvette or something. Gotcha. Thats cool. I assure you green_ithcy_stuff has nothing to do with my name, and I'm not trying to be a smart-mouth.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

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