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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
You are the morning sun Open my eyes to your light Waken me from the dark Bless me with your sight Warm me in your gold embrace And kiss with heat upon this face How much in awe as I rise You touch all with in your reach Breathing life into dormant slumber Capturing this sleeper with your speech The path above Earth you mount Upon this thought I always count Just one day to meet you there Be able to touch you too Give warmth to fill the void As your travels daily do Somehow I wish upon you, my star To the eternal light that you are |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Just one day to meet you there Be able to touch you too Give warmth to fill the void As your travels daily do Somehow I wish upon you, my star To the eternal light that you are ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ so wistfully lovely...an ethereal beauty... cool personifi of the sun .... I loved the devotion of the closing lines, also it read aloud so smoothly, well done. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
an offering of romance, producing life time sparks and a place called home simply lovely! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A glowing write Magician. believe in what your heart feels... |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Beautiful. Everyone needs a love like this one...one to wish upon. I hope you have truly found yours...I really enjoyed this poem. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You are the morning sun Open my eyes to your light Waken me from the dark Bless me with your sight Warm me in your gold embrace And kiss with heat upon this face" how beautiful this is.... I like this very much, it is....very smooth.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful indeed... Much enjoyed the read, hugs, Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...Magician... we all needed such a lovely as this, today. It's been awhile. Welcome home! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
an enjoyably warm sunny write, magician |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, this is just beautiful. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
awwwwwww this was beyond words...I wish my boyfriend would write me gorgeous poetry such as this..I'm jealous..  *sigh* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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