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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-07-27 09:04 AM



This Is My Song


It
never
gets any better
the trying
getting tiring

Useless
I begin to think,
as the hole gets deeper
and the feelings
begin to fill it
once again

They slip through,
the tears,
even though the front
has been up there
hiding them

Everything catches up
eventually
even the nightmares
to replace the passion
of hope...

this is my song

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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yv
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 574

1 posted 2005-07-27 09:06 AM


And what a sad song it is.  Oft times my nights are filled with visions you thought would stop disrupting your sleep.  That's just the trouble with denial...in my case anyway!

Lovely write!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-07-27 09:06 AM


Maureen,
A sad song try a new one.

MGROVES
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california
3 posted 2005-07-27 09:12 AM


hug to you
may you soul sing a song of love to the beat of your heart as your spirit takes flight above all pain~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-07-27 12:56 PM


Such a sad song..
I do hope you will be singing a happier tune soon.
Heart Hugs, Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2005-07-27 07:14 PM


If it wasn't for sad songs, we'd never know the meaning of happy, my friend, nor would we know the fulness of life. It's how we sing them that counts.

j.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2005-07-27 07:27 PM


I know just how you feel.
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