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evomx5
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0 posted 2005-07-27 07:45 AM



Moonlight brightly shining
A summer breeze is blowing
Standing on the terrace
Your beauty softly glowing

Music through the open door
Quietly, slowly playing
I feel your body next to mine
Your hips are gently swaying

You turn yourself to face me
Your arms go ‘round my neck
I wrap my arms around your waist
You give my lips a peck

You lay your head against my chest
My heartbeat loud and clear
You close your eyes and breathe in deep
The music’s what you hear

We start to move, the music calls
You stand upon my feet
Just you and me, no one around
Our lips, they softly meet

No words, we speak between us
In the moment, we’re entranced
Our hearts were bound together
The first time that we danced.



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1 posted 2005-07-27 07:57 AM


evomx5
A delight to read.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-07-27 08:03 AM


ravished by your words...indeed a delightfully deep read....enjoyed
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3 posted 2005-07-27 08:59 AM


enjoyed this~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

yv
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4 posted 2005-07-27 09:09 AM


Lovely...Romantic...my heart goes to the melody as with the dancers in their reverie!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

froggy
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5 posted 2005-07-27 03:57 PM


Beautifully written.
Enjoyed.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-07-29 12:18 PM


Nice...James
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with you
7 posted 2005-07-29 09:00 AM


*melt*

this is so soft and romantic...


Enchantress
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8 posted 2005-07-29 09:23 AM


Beautiful...great imagery, much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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