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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-07-27 03:53 AM



The color on my skin is so bright
Where it actually is
Under all the air
Influential waves of friends met along the way

I want to focus and see it from actual size
Peering up at this Monument
Standing so high over my head
More than one
Breath, slowly, exhale
The deepest screams inside
An electric body and the currents
Vibe whizzle glow

My tender chaos
So overwhelming
To just do it and the blue comes in
This stand point that freezes
Eyes pop and gouge out
Giving everything inside me to freeze
Icy hard
Touch, crack, break, shatter

An explosion so real
My trembling hands in the wrong place

Here is my soul for you
Is this what you can love?
Pin-prick lines and jumbo jets flying

I just wanted to give you
Low lay decree for you
Stone wall I fell through

Taste it before coagulating death
Erosion dissappears
Congruatchion state

Real...
...realize
Tender ashes,
    ...this is you
  Under a mistletoe...

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-27 04:17 PM


Craig~
This literally had me holding my breath through the read~

'My tender chaos
So overwhelming'


This is simply a line to die for~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-07-28 02:16 AM


Thank you.  Life has been a little weird lately and it churns up some somewhat sour notes.  Thank you again.

(Hugs back)

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

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