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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-26 07:03 PM



It was an old day hitting rocks and Sleepy hadn't changed his vest for weeks

Bed was his vest

And sleepy had fell in love with his dreams

Every night his chest rose and fell

And then 'One dark night'

Sleepy stayed awake

Repairing the old rope bridge and Snoozy working on Dozey

For the feeling

That the old bridge needed fixing

And

"Tune in next week folks"

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-07-26 07:04 PM


LOL
but of course, I shall tune in!
and why am I feeling like 'sneezy' right now?

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-07-26 09:16 PM


At least Kacy feels like Sneezy...

me?

I just feel like Dopey.


yv
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3 posted 2005-07-26 09:54 PM


Well...well...very nice.  Can't wait to see what happens in next week's episode...HaHa!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

MGROVES
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california
4 posted 2005-07-27 01:38 AM


cute~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

froggy
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Michigan
5 posted 2005-07-27 04:04 PM


Neat.
Looking forward to next part.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
6 posted 2005-07-27 05:23 PM


Thanks everyone

Just a silly for the next issue on Monday

Bodger

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7 posted 2005-07-27 09:54 PM


CUTE
Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2005-07-28 05:27 PM


delightful read, and I am waiting on next Monday now..lol.
cute read.

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
9 posted 2005-07-28 05:33 PM


The One & Only

CUTE

Thanks

Gentle Spirit
  

delightful read, and I am waiting on next Monday now..lol.
cute read.

Unless I get sued by Disney I'll work on it over the weekend for the gang

Thanks Bodger

Ceinwyn
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10 posted 2005-07-30 05:21 PM


I've fallen in love with my dreams too enjoyed this, this was sweet

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2005-07-30 07:50 PM




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