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Twilight

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 07-26-2005 01:36 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


And as I ran
In a dream
Carrying you in my arms

The world was no more—
The sun—did not move

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-26-2005 01:50 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

John, this imagery certainly leaves much to interpretation. Perhaps it's just the moment, but I read this as sad.
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2 posted 07-26-2005 06:16 PM       View Profile for Bodger   Email Bodger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bodger

Write some more

It is too good to just stop

Bodger
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3 posted 07-26-2005 06:49 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I do love your poetry, although quite often I find myself wishing you'd go on...

(and coincidentally, I've a framed print on my wall that conveys this a maked similarity to this image.)

Enjoyed.
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4 posted 04-27-2007 12:28 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

beautiful, beautiful!!!
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