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MGROVES
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0 posted 2005-07-26 09:22 AM




it has been dark
in this mind
lost for all to see~
words of love
light mistaken
yet i was not blind to thee~
had to remain silent
while thoughts raced about~
my faith being tested
so i gave something
without a shout~
part of me
no one wants to believe~
so with his mercy
i fall
yet
not as they
intended
then made my reprieve~
to be without sin~
his word could never
be heard, or a journey begin~
i was once lost
but our creator
showed me the way~
unbound the chains
that kept love from
the heart, forgiveness from
the soul, and a spirit becomeing
one with gods love and word
peace within
i am who i am
and i am who i am meant to be
not lost little girl
but `lady of faith
beholding
only to gods word, where love
forever shall stay~



My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

© Copyright 2005 marsha groves~adragonsdream~ - All Rights Reserved
yv
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1 posted 2005-07-26 09:44 AM


I must say...that was a rather beautiful epiphany.  I loved it!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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2 posted 2005-07-26 09:46 AM


thankyou

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-07-26 06:24 PM


Lovely...James
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4 posted 2005-07-27 01:16 AM


thankyou

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2005-07-27 07:20 AM


Very beautiful..i like your words...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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6 posted 2005-07-27 07:26 AM


MGROVES
Faith is a wonderful thing.

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7 posted 2005-07-27 07:38 AM


this is living proof, just how we need to submit to whatever it is leads us...in patience and faith...that all will work a wonder of life's true meaning for each of us...extremely well done!
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8 posted 2005-07-27 09:05 AM


bless you GR
bless you sir sy
and bless you lee    may you life be
blessed and filled with peace and joy

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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9 posted 2005-07-27 01:33 PM


SweetLadyOfFaith~

'i was once lost
but our creator
showed me the way~'


He's always got the perfect map ...
and walks each step of the way with us~

I love this ... I love you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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10 posted 2005-07-29 07:59 AM


"i am who i am
and i am who i am meant to be
not lost little girl
but `lady of faith
beholding"

The entire piece touched me...but I think I will hold these words above close to my heart as I begin this day.

I am better for having read this poem.

Thank you...
Patricia

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11 posted 2005-07-29 08:09 AM


faith looks good on a woman
along with a little tan
and some smile lines

enjoyed it ms g

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12 posted 2005-07-29 08:49 AM


Wonderfully written.

believe in what your heart feels...

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13 posted 2005-07-30 11:36 PM


bless you all for your kind replies~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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14 posted 2005-12-12 12:07 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Marsha, I too used to be a shackled spirit who faced much abuse, misunderstanding and neglect as a child, and now I've never felt more free and happy in all my life, with following Him making all the difference in fulfilling my life with faith and guidance! (sigh) Yay, God Bless You, we're all sooooooo proud of you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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15 posted 2005-12-12 12:09 PM


thank you. for your heart and compassion. i am truly greatful for you time.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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16 posted 2005-12-12 02:16 AM


this moved me very much
~wolfman

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17 posted 2005-12-12 03:39 AM


i am who i am
and i am who i am meant to be
not lost little girl
but `lady of faith
beholding
only to gods word, where love
forever shall stay~



This really touched my heart. I am so glad
it came back up so that I didn't miss it.
Thank you for sharing your heart with us.
Hugs,
Ethel

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18 posted 2005-12-12 06:33 AM


thankyou so much

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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19 posted 2005-12-15 10:11 AM


absolutely beautiful!!!
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