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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-07-26 04:11 AM


Stretching fingers of
sunlight touch and
magically illuminate filigree
spiders webs, starbright.
Trees dripping moisture,
droplets like icing
sugar, sprinkled sparkling.
Damp scented streets,
puddles reflecting dark
shadows, rippling breeze
quivers hard lines,
zig-zagging passing
silhouettes, in mornings
lugubrious gloomy day.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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1 posted 2005-07-26 09:26 AM


I couldn't read this without smiling with the memory of being out on a country road trying to photograph spider webs glistening with moisture and shimmering with colors in the sunbeams... and being interrupted every few minutes by kind travelers thinking I needed help and stopping to offer aid. *S*

Beautiful write, my friend! *S*

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california
2 posted 2005-07-26 09:32 AM


very nice, enjoyed this

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

yv
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3 posted 2005-07-26 09:43 AM


How radiant!  The images are so vibrant and so...I felt myself in a forest of aftershock...after a heavy rain...just beautiful!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2005-07-26 12:39 PM


Wow I like this alot

-Juju

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5 posted 2005-07-26 01:42 PM


Ah, yes!!  I love it when it rains...and all the things my senses take in when it's over...VERY beautiful!!     ~ Becka
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6 posted 2005-07-27 04:22 AM


Thank you all for your kind replies..the poem came to me ..but i didnt write it out straight away..i refined it in my mind first... then kept it in my memory..before writing it down.so pleased that it brought back memories for some..early morning spiders webs are a wonder of nature aren't they?..thank you ..

Goldenrose.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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