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0 posted 2005-07-25 08:55 PM


Fast Company
By: Noah Eaton
7/25/05

She rolls with heels on fire,
she burns rubber on the make,
smoother than a Maserati 450S,
faster than Tallagea Speedway,
love tappin’ hearts left and right,
no one can seem to keep up with her,
she’s laid a patch across my heart,
droppin’ the rag on all my desires.

Now my heart’s blazed through the wind tunnel,
she’s got my heart poppin’ the clutch,
she’s got me on the groove,
all jacked up on her hot love.

She’s electric heaven on wheels,
she revs my heartbeat rate from 72 to 150,
she feels the need for speed,
she’s sexy, sweet fast company.

We spend happy hour,
playing back seat bingo,
fully loaded on bent eight love,
tempted by "Little Deuce Coup" on the radio,
she loves being in control,
we’re in for the ride of our lives,
nothing can stop us now,
we’re just too hot for the pole position life.

She got me spinning on a chassis roll,
straight to her classy chassis,
I’m gonna show her what I’m made of,
kiss her mouth so hot her lips simmer like molasses.

She’s electric heaven on wheels,
she revs my heartbeat rate from 72 to 150,
she feels the need for speed,
she’s sexy, sweet fast company.

She’s a wild girl on circuit,
she’s passion pit adherent,
she’s grace behind every turn,
checkered pasts are of no concern to her,
wild hearts, start your engines,
now that she’s caught your attention,
keep up with her and you’ll have it made,
poppin’ wheelies on through the victory lane!

She’s electric heaven on wheels,
she revs my heartbeat rate from 72 to 150,
she feels the need for speed,
she’s sexy, sweet fast company.

(Nothing can stop us now,
we’re just too hot for the pole position life!
Va vroom vroom!)



"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2005-07-25 11:07 PM


Noah,

Wow, you go boy! Pickin up speed on the highway, light years ahead on a road that needs repair. NOTHING is gonna slow you down.
I liked this poem/song.

SG

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2 posted 2005-07-25 11:29 PM


You are so versitile.  This brought smiles and reminded me every young man, it seems,  has a love affair with a car.  This piece begs to be set to music.  

Thanks for sharing yet another facet of yourself, Noah.

God bless,

   Rae

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3 posted 2005-07-26 12:01 PM


woo! This is "racey" Noah

enjoyed!!

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4 posted 2005-07-26 09:35 AM


HaHa!!  Yay...that was just absolutely delictable!  I loved every moment of it!  I wonder...who's the lucky lady who mesmerized you enough to mesmerize us?

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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