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Open Poetry #36

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Caraway
Junior Member

since 2005-07-14

Posts 24

0 posted 2005-07-25 04:55 PM

Okay, this is a work in progress. It really has no title because it is for my wedding day to give to my husband to be, Jason. It will be cleaned up and modified later. I thought I would put it out there for some feedback.

My beloved, my world
You are the sun that gives life, life to the moon,
When hope seems to fade and all is lost
You are the beacon, the light that radiates to me

When I see who I am through your eyes
I am all that I want to be
For I am only as beautiful
As the sun is to the moon
Forever shining for you,
My earth

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

1 posted 2005-07-25 05:21 PM

"When I see who I am through your eyes
I am all that I want to be
For I am only as beautiful
As the sun is to the moon
Forever shining for you,
My earth"

I like this part...beautiful

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2005-07-25 05:36 PM

I liked this alot!

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Caraway
Junior Member

since 2005-07-14

Posts 24

3 posted 2005-07-25 05:41 PM

Thank you both for your kind replies.

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