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scorpio
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0 posted 2005-07-25 08:46 AM



Sugared Sand

Water lapping near
Softly shifting sugared sand
I hold you once more.

believe in what your heart feels...

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-07-25 08:50 AM



A renewal...

Wonderful, Sir.

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2 posted 2005-07-25 09:28 AM


scorpio
Enjoyed

Juju
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3 posted 2005-07-25 11:47 AM


I liked this one alot.  I have a love for short poems that is .......  Well a love...]


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

scorpio
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4 posted 2005-07-25 12:03 PM


Yes Karilea..a renewal for sure.  Thank you.

Thank you Sy.  I always appreciate your support.

And I know what you mean Juju.  Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-07-25 02:19 PM


Scorpio~I recall a place such as this..
where the wind had whipped the sand into sugar
almost like cotton candy..a treat for the senses.
I must go back in search of how it made me feel, once again.
Thank you for this memory today.
~Smiles, Hugs, & Luv ya, Tinker~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

scorpio
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6 posted 2005-07-25 08:19 PM


Tinker I'm pleased that this poem stirred memories for you.  Come walk the beach with me. Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

EagleScorpion
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7 posted 2005-07-26 05:51 PM


really? i want to go to this place too! Let's go surfing!
scorpio
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8 posted 2005-07-26 07:34 PM


Thank you Eagle Scorpion.  Surfing could be fun..but the waves aren't very high.

believe in what your heart feels...

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9 posted 2005-07-26 08:47 PM


a sweet write
dipping my toes into sugared sands...what an image
then rinsing off in poetic waves ...

scorpio
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10 posted 2005-07-27 08:49 AM


Midnightsun thank you for your wonderful reply.  Much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

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