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lyricpoet
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0 posted 2005-07-25 07:59 AM


The Sleep

I fumble her spirit in crowns of sunlight by holy words of foreign tongue. That in which the language of love I speak.

Why paradise in pleasure?
Why partings in oceans?
Why does the rain reply?
Why do brooks run dry

Why do rivers overflow when seas of blue worship the sky?

For every rose to seek it’s beauty upon her cheek. Dance another tune played within her kiss asleep. To wake and let her heart run to me with open arms into the nations of love.

(C) Kevin Brian Wright

© Copyright 2005 Kevin Brian Wright - All Rights Reserved
yv
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1 posted 2005-07-25 09:40 AM


Que hermosa...Guapito!  I must say...I am truly moved.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

lyricpoet
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2 posted 2005-07-25 09:59 AM


I greatly apprectiate you thoughts on my work, thank you!!
Juju
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3 posted 2005-07-25 11:39 AM


Enjoyed

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-07-25 01:56 PM



Ah, as precious as an old-fashioned song!
I enjoyed this, Sir...thank you!

Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-07-25 02:00 PM


Very very nice..would love to hear this put to music.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

lyricpoet
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6 posted 2005-07-25 03:33 PM


many thanks to you both
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