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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-07-25 07:53 AM


The Mist

The mist has wrapped its haze around
Its words of Braille without a sound
Giving essence to the brain
To sooth the edges of inane

And this is heavy with its coup
The fireflies that light the dew
The emissaries of to be
To look into and see the see

It is the clothing of the morn
The revelries of early dawn
The promise of the day to come
The journey of the way of one

I bath and brew this early dew
This offer of the coming coup
And titillate the suns unwrap
And drink my fill this sweet of sap

This is the thread that weaves my day
This is the dress and stage in play


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-07-25 08:28 AM


The mist has wrapped its haze around
Its words of Braille without a sound
Giving essence to the brain
To sooth the edges of inane

~*~

The lightest touch...
that feels so much!


scorpio
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2 posted 2005-07-25 08:41 AM


A gentle way to start the day Sy!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Juju
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3 posted 2005-07-25 11:47 AM


Like always my friend much enjoyed.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Marilyn
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4 posted 2005-07-25 12:37 PM


ohh I love this. The way i can see the mist dance with what is to come.

Nice write.

Marilyn.

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5 posted 2005-07-25 01:46 PM


Felt as though I were floating on a cloud as I read this Sy.
Wonderful words for us today..much enjoyed.
& , Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2005-07-25 07:35 PM


The emissaries of to be
To look into and see the see

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

oh you get extra EXTRA winkies for that couplet.

*ww*


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7 posted 2005-07-26 05:22 AM


oh dear sir, how i have missed the joy and smiles~ got a lot of catching up to do~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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