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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-07-24 11:36 AM



In that glance
She saw herself
As she is
And would be after

And someone in time
Will stop, and wonder
Why—he has no words

http://www.juliesulzen.com/portraitbig12.html


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1 posted 2005-07-24 11:40 AM


Beautifully captured -- and I agree, that self-portrait is so very simple, but the depth of emotion it shows is breathtaking.

Thanks for the link. I'm going to keep it and spend some time there.

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The Jackal
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2 posted 2005-07-24 12:36 PM


very deep sounds almost like a prophecy, take care

The Mongrel cat came home, Holding half a head proceeded to show it off to all his new found friends

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Gaia
3 posted 2005-07-24 05:13 PM


a beautiful write that FEELS
and perhaps, accurately describes that glance

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4 posted 2005-07-24 05:24 PM


Very Beautiful, very much enjoyed.
Juju
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5 posted 2005-07-24 07:16 PM


well done.


-Juju

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