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Open Poetry #36

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-07-24 01:14 AM

when the pool is deep

if shallow end disappears

cling tenaciously

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2005-07-24 09:52 AM

Hmm.. Had to think about this one lol

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

2 posted 2005-07-24 01:08 PM

ahh yes

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 2005-07-24 07:54 PM

works for me!

INclan

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2005-07-24 10:15 PM

erm, i thought you were being cheekily smug with your title "come, look at my profound senry" but your words actually complemented your title very well

thanks for the raised eyebrows and for the hasty click. heee

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-07-25 02:00 PM

Oh, those early days of life, when the pool was overhead at 3' deep!

I enjoyed the cool feel of this, Kacy!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-07-25 02:09 PM

Ooooh! E X C E L L E N T Kacy!!!

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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