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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 2005-07-22 11:53 PM


A Faded Photograph

The scattered fragments fall in wisps
from aged and weathered fingertips.
His calloused digits hold the pen
they’ve clasped before, time and again.
His mind, once sharp, now seems so dull.
Though Mem’ries come, there’s still a lull,
a gentle fog to ease the pain
that wrinkled brow beneath its strain.

The years have flown, though not been kind;
they’ve left their mark on health and mind
and with the passing of each day
he feels her mem’ry slip away.
He struggles now with bits of rhyme,
his last attempt to stall the time,
to grasp one glimpse of yesterday
before death steals it all away.

The aged and weary poet writes
of love once young and star filled nights,
of how love found, then nurtured grew,
and of a life once shared by two.
He writes of children, born, now grown,
who settled out to find their own.
He pens the tale of all those years,
the tapestry of joy and tears.

And as he writes the minutes fly.
Sometimes he smiles, sometimes he sighs.
Each page, each word becomes a part
of all that ever touched his heart.
The hours pass. The daylight wanes,
until one story, yet, remains
and though he’s tired, drained, and pale
he must record this one last tale.

Alas once more, aged fingers clasp
his pen, his key, to open hasp
that seals the chambers of his mind.
He struggles, searches, just to find
the words to pen his ancient pain
that nearly drove this man insane.
And then he writes of death and grief,
of hurt that never finds relief.

His shoulders quake. The teardrops fall
to smear the ink that tells it all.
He pictures mound with etched tombstone
where many days he’s spent alone
replacing flowers on the grave
of faithful wife he couldn’t save.
Each tear, each heartache put to words
that wrinkled hand slowly records.

When done the poet, void and dry,
puts down his pen and starts to cry
then lays his tale, his epitaph,
beside her faded photograph.


I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

© Copyright 2005 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2005-07-23 12:18 PM


Sighhhhh, i've missed reading your beautiful poetry Ruth.

Thank you.

it's a

Maree xx

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

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2 posted 2005-07-23 01:26 AM


goodness...this definately needs a tissue alert...beautifully touching... and yes, it's great to get to read you again!!
2dalimit
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3 posted 2005-07-23 09:00 AM


I enjoyed your wonderful tale of love.

Thanks.   Melton

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4 posted 2005-07-23 10:32 AM


Some things fade, like photographs, but thank goodness there are those few things that last and last....

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Tim
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5 posted 2005-07-24 05:23 PM


Mike wanted ya to know, this one is a keeper.  Wonderful writing.
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6 posted 2005-07-24 05:29 PM


"He struggles now with bits of rhyme,
his last attempt to stall the time,
to grasp one glimpse of yesterday
before death steals it all away."

~sigh~ I will be keeping this tender piece.

BeWitched
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7 posted 2005-07-24 05:30 PM


Really really beautiful, enjoyed muchly
Sunshine
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8 posted 2005-07-24 08:23 PM


It is ok, I think
to remind you to please
issue hanky alerts ...

Ruth...

I found this very poignant, and
full of heart on this first read...

however, I shall be back, for more.

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 2005-07-24 10:15 PM


Thank you all
Juju
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10 posted 2005-07-24 11:47 PM


Reminds me of one of my horribly sad stories....

-JUju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

INclan
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11 posted 2005-08-16 05:52 PM


OK, that isn't fair!  No fair ripping my heart out.  Yes, I also cry in movies...but don't tell anyone.
INclan

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12 posted 2005-08-16 06:44 PM


oh my...
how moving!

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13 posted 2005-08-16 06:44 PM


Ruth you write such truth! I have been missing your presence and your poetry here at pip. You have gifted this reader with a that I will be visiting from time to time.

Warm, welcome-back hugs,
Linda
P.S. Not only was your writing vividly descriptive and emotive, it's rhythmic cadence was spell-binding.

latearrival
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14 posted 2005-08-16 11:18 PM


Very touching words you put together. Sad but all too true.   Best to you, martyjo
iliana
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15 posted 2005-08-16 11:48 PM


Hoot..........you do it right!!!  Very moving.   ......jo
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16 posted 2005-08-16 11:52 PM


very moving and well written; enjoyed the life journey

   miscellanea

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17 posted 2005-08-17 01:14 AM


Ruth...Such tender and touching words.
Worthy of a special place in my mind and on my wall forever...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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18 posted 2005-08-17 10:04 AM


HootieGal~
Your words move me through recall of photographs, long-faded, and fortunately ... memories that have not~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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19 posted 2005-08-17 10:33 AM


You move me, Ruth...

you are so easy to read~~~

Hope you are well

M

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20 posted 2005-08-17 09:30 PM


You nudge the heart in all you write,
No exception was this poem read tonight.

I hope he never puts down the pen, never!  Beautiful Ruth, and I sure wish I was there playing with you and the rest of the crew.

hoot_owl_rn
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21 posted 2005-08-18 11:50 AM


Thank you all for your lovely comments to this piece. I know I am not here in presence often, but I am never far from here in mind. I appreciate your continued support of my poetry
Hugs
Ruth

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