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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-07-22 11:49 AM


What was this

       Tenderness

you gave freely
gifting yourself to me
            subtly
in your own ways

sharing words
and heart warmed smiles
while speaking         of life
and all our trials

You brought the light
of hopes golden rays
then you disappeared

and went away

now, I'm here
         not knowing
what went amiss
and wondering why

oh why

you put on this show
of tenderness.



Give me your heart
Make it real
Or else forget about it...Santana

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HopeS
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1 posted 2005-07-22 12:00 PM


I know that feeling , I am wondering why someone has disappeared too

Hope

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-07-22 12:27 PM


Sounds as though he/she was less than sincere.
Sending heart hugs your way Donna.
Love ya lady~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Martie
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3 posted 2005-07-22 12:32 PM



inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-07-22 11:12 PM


who knows how the wind blows
sometimes we can only sigh

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-07-22 11:14 PM


When matters are

most

tender

sometimes?

That is when the pain
is closest!

Goldenrose
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6 posted 2005-07-23 07:38 AM


Like a passgae form an important book..enjoyed this read thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Patricia
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Missouri
7 posted 2005-07-24 07:53 AM


Yes, I do know this, and you have written the experience perfectly.

Patricia  

BeWitched
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8 posted 2005-07-24 05:42 PM


I hear ya. Wonderfully expressed.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2005-07-24 06:06 PM


the heart of the matter is, that all too often, we never know why a relationship doesn' last past the first blossom
Juju
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In your dreams
10 posted 2005-07-24 06:51 PM




Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Dark Angel
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11 posted 2005-07-24 06:57 PM


hey Bella.. &

Mxx

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
12 posted 2005-07-27 03:04 AM


Yeah, its kinda like that.  I don't like it when it feels like Hes no where around.  I like to be able to feel Him.  A very important book indeed... I don't know how to insert smiley icons or I'd send you a smile, but wait (=P), sorta... lol.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

MGROVES
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13 posted 2005-07-27 03:09 AM


yes a very important book

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2005-07-28 02:36 PM


wow, you guys overwhelm me with your kindness...
thanks and hugggss

I refuse to make plans past this moment in time....

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