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evomx5
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0 posted 2005-07-22 10:22 AM



His soul reflected in her eyes
A love she barely could disguise
He came to her upon the word
Of passion she had never heard

His heart, an open book to read
Filling up her every need
Speaking right to her it seems
How could he see into her dreams

To know the longing of her heart
A restlessness that tears apart
All she ever thought should be
Replaced now with this love she sees

Overwhelmed with what she’s feeling
Certain that her heart is healing
Tasting every word he speaks
Telling her just what she seeks

She is in love with him, she knows
And he with her, his words it shows
Their souls connected through the verse
Within each other they immerse.



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1 posted 2005-07-22 10:27 AM


every single word....pure perfection!

and into my library this goes!

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2 posted 2005-07-22 06:26 PM


cool write! nice rhyme, nice thoughts
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