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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-07-22 07:17 AM

you turned the channels
I turned your thoughts
there were pretentions
stuffing envelopes
without splinters
you wondered if I would lick

or just force the flap inside
and not care about seam healing
and if my metal would be cold
on winter mornings
when the lake was froze over
and sundresses had parkas

or if my hands were the same
as yours when you touch the water
and did the earthquakes come
as expected, unexpectedly
like our conversations recently
although the thoughts were older

then the taxi days of our parking, lots

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dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-07-22 07:24 AM

Who cannot enjoy such a winding
of thoughts, and alleys of avenues?

You're such a delightful read
with the first cup.

Thank you!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-07-22 08:06 AM

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-07-22 08:18 AM

Enjoyed the way you so well describe the ever changing tides of a relationship, understanding and knowing it is not always a smooth go, yet pointing out the importance of compatibility...well done

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (07-22-2005 09:18 AM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-07-22 09:14 AM

"or if my hands were the same
as yours when you touch the water
and did the earthquakes come
as expected, unexpectedly"
loved this part...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2005-07-22 02:46 PM

or if my hands were the same
as yours when you touch the water
and did the earthquakes come
as expected, unexpectedly
like our conversations recently
although the thoughts were older
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your hands do quite well when touching a pen as well.

stuffing envelopes
without splinters
you wondered if I would lick

now theres some interesting symbolism.
yer too cool Dark poetman.

I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain
I don't mind helping you out
But I want you to remember my name

Alanis

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2005-10-26 11:26 PM

Sometimes a poem settles, like wine, into clarity and a certain poignant lilt that is neither sweet nor bitter, only good.

I'm glad I uncorked this one tonight.

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-10-26 11:33 PM

I'm glad Ratleader uncorked this tonight too!
hmmm...feeling the licking of the flap

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