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So Carelessly
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So Carelessly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So Carelessly In my mind I wanted to break up with her and I wondered how much time was inbetween the thoughts of wanting too and following through. In her mind perhaps she's already broken up with me, otherwise... how could she hold me in such disregard to treat me so carelessly. JamesLee July21 2005 Broken Heart Series Not a current event. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
glad for the disclaimer! whew.... very emotional write  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed , yes if only they let you know their thoughts and what was on their mind Hope |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
quote: enjoyed these poetic lines |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
darlin, people do the best that they know how, she wasn't aware of how she was treating you and I don't believe meant any personal insult or hurt...you see, we expect people to know our needs and be like us, feel like us, know what to do and what not to do...but it wasn't you, she just did the best she was raised to do...conditioned to do, just like all of us are...she didn't fail you...she was simply being herself...doing all she knew how to do, ya know? Don't be to hard on either one of you... thanks for sharing hun...well put, felt and written. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea, Hope, kaile and Lee J for the nice responses... Lee J, I think I needed that....James |
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