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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2005-07-21 09:18 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#217

Copyright 2005 by:  Mark V Sheldon


northern lights

a cloud of changes
shocks
us

china is on fire

as the stars
patiently
wait

out of sight




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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-07-21 10:03 AM


MARK,
A thinker, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-07-21 10:20 AM


Well, Mark, I cannot say that I understand your poem, but I will say this, I did enjoy every line of it. Each one created a vivid image in my mind.


Linda

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-07-21 10:38 AM


we tend to hate change, don't we....

love your always thought provoking smiles...

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Gaia
4 posted 2005-07-21 06:03 PM


hey
I am just on vacation for a while
LOL

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