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Ghostly Lover...when dreams are all you have
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Ghostly Lover...when dreams are all you have |
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evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
Upon the shadows, he does ride Into her dreams at night Seducing every inch of her With all his ghostly might The passion that he lavishes Like none she’s ever known Possessed her in the daylight His magic softly sown She cannot wait for dusk to fall To dress in flowing gown And pull the covers from the bed To lay her body down And wait for sleep, when he will come Fulfilling every need This ghostly lover she requires To do his nightly deed. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*whew* this is awesome!  "The passion that he lavishes Like none she’s ever known Possessed her in the daylight His magic softly sown" |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
A very passionate write indeed. Also, the poem had a very interesting rhyme scheme. I dig it. -John nice use of muffin |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
ohh yes wonderfully expressed sensual dreams Hope |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now she's my kind of dreamer, that ghost I bet, did not leave the toilet seat up!  |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautifully written,images it gives as well. Enjoyed the read. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Reminds me of that movie~The Entity~ So are you a ghost?.... I am going to sleep..closing my eyes right now....dreaming... ~ARH  "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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