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poe
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0 posted 2005-07-21 01:51 AM


Love may be too strong a word
Yet the emotions say other wise
Is love at first sight really that absurb
Does love truly wear a disguise
Her name quivering from your lips
Standing in awe of her
Beauty as rare as a solar eclipse
All the other woman become a blur
No lust in my mind
A simple wish to hold her dear
For our hands to be entwined
To be one with her of this you are sincere
Being able to brush her hair aside
Seeing grooves on the nape of this beauties neck
An embrace that one does not willingly divide
The sunshine at the end of a long trek
Your minds on the same wave length
Like to statues breaking away from their prison
Seeing past the glitz to her inner strength
A new love has a risen
Lovers these two have become
Their beings are one
Hearts no longer numb
A bond that can not be undone

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

© Copyright 2005 Poe Wilson - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2005-07-21 03:36 AM


Simply loved it!

Thought provoking....

Enjoyed!

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

poe
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2 posted 2005-07-22 12:11 PM


Thank you for your kind words

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

River
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3 posted 2005-07-23 12:46 PM


wow, this sounds so much like my boyfriend right now, I think it puts into context everything he's said. =) yay, I love this poem!

             - River

How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse

poe
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4 posted 2005-07-27 12:34 PM


I am glad that my poem could make you think of a loved one and feel their words that little bit more.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

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