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lyricpoet
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0 posted 2005-07-20 06:20 PM


A Praise Worthy Heart

She is Queen over all proud kingdoms, and leaves a shining path under all that walk in love. She drinks in my words of passion like the late rain feasting on an early light.

The lord saw the blessings in my eyes and appraised it and gave it setting in her heart. For the light of her beauty breaks into night and steals the sun back from the moon  before the return of dawn.

From the commands of her sterling lips, pass the vows we shall fulfill. Where the holy shall rise and charge her with profitable beauty. Parades of pleasure takes hold of my every glimpse of the;

sweet splendor that reveals her face in progress. My mouth shall address her with words of love for they are a spirit of a man in praise. For the breath of her heart shall keep me alive in endless days of love

Author (C) Kevin Brian Wright


© Copyright 2005 Kevin Brian Wright - All Rights Reserved
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such a romantic you are! this is lovely
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2 posted 2005-07-20 07:30 PM


I love your poetry so much I am in awe.
I don't even know what to reply, except that
I just love it.
Hugs,
Ethel

lyricpoet
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3 posted 2005-07-20 08:16 PM


Thank you both for your comments, many thanks...!
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4 posted 2005-07-21 04:04 AM


WOW!

What devotion, emotion and love~and passion! did I mention passion!!!!

I am jealous~

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

lyricpoet
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5 posted 2005-07-21 06:51 AM


thank you,
A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2005-07-21 07:39 AM


Jealous of her~not you..LOL

She is blessed~to have such art, such words devine written, spoken about her...

I could be a Queen~ Are you taking any applications? where do I sign up?
~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

lyricpoet
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7 posted 2005-07-21 07:42 AM


just email me, LOL...thanks for the kind words...!
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8 posted 2005-07-21 11:20 PM


Like this...a lot...James
lyricpoet
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9 posted 2005-07-21 11:40 PM


thank you...james
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