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Tim
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0 posted 2005-07-20 12:13 PM


I miss you poem,
Where did you go?
I wish I knew,
But I don’t know.
You were right here,
Or so I thought,
Here in my mind,
But now you’re not,
You’ve done run off,
I don’t know why,
And now you’re gone,
Oh well, good-bye.

Addendum:

I have looked high,
I have looked low,
I still don't know
Where you did go.
Perhaps you left
To watch TV
And did not feel,
A need to tell me.
Or maybe you,
just took a trip,
A short vacation,
by plane or ship,
I guess that I
will never know,
where it is
that you did go.

Addendum to addendum:

Have you seen my poem,
She's up and ran away,
I know she's not off working,
She really likes to play.
If per chance you see her,
Tell her I'm quite sad,
And if she will come back to me,
I promise to not be mad.
Tell her that I miss her,
I need her flowing rhyme,
Without her bubbly meter,
I'm blue most of the time.

© Copyright 2005 Tim - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-20 01:49 AM


I have to tell you that this had a "Cat In The Hat" feel to it and I loved it!  Hope you find her.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-07-20 08:34 AM


Tim
Brought a smile to my face, thank you.

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with you
3 posted 2005-07-21 12:41 PM


maybe if you call her sweetly, she will come back?
Marilyn
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4 posted 2005-07-25 01:10 PM


Did you check under the secretary's desk? Or maybe in the facilities on the next floor up?
She might have got stuck in the fridge while looking for a snack. Possiblly at the neighbours house having a visit?

I hope you find her soon. I know the feeling of desparation when the pen dries up and the peom runs away.

Good luck.

Marilyn.

Juju
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In your dreams
5 posted 2005-07-25 01:29 PM


I like this one alot

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2005-07-25 01:40 PM


  

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2005-07-25 01:49 PM


Great Grins...
thank you for this!

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8 posted 2005-07-26 06:00 AM


nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2005-07-26 07:20 AM



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