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Tim
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0 posted 2005-07-19 11:51 PM



At first blush, it might seem her beauty is so pure
That never could mere mortals hope to experience her desire,
With skin so smooth and lips so full, as to lure
Any man into a bottomless well of her sultry fire,
Those who gaze into her eyes, say they see a clear blue sky
And that her hair shines golden as a midnight August moon,
But skies aren’t blue, nor Luna gold, and pigs don’t fly,
And while it might be a man might swoon,
He soon would learn that if he were by a siren kissed,
That Shangri la does only in the mind exist..

© Copyright 2005 Tim - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2005-07-20 12:22 PM


Cool stuff.  Is there something in the air tonight...?  I need a breath of it...

-MVS

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passionatepoet
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since 2005-07-11
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2 posted 2005-07-20 12:30 PM


great poem i love it. IT'S REALLY SWEET!
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