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tatalinia
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0 posted 2005-12-17 08:59 PM



I have come to this earth
to fulfill something of greatness
when it is finished so shall I
for my time is short
but my words will go on
Im not afraid of death or
whatever I must face
for the pain I have endured
from this life has consumed
my life and built me strong
nothing will take me down
till my time is done
I speak in riddles i speak with
ryhme
I do not need shine or wealth
just a pen and some paper
for my health


© Copyright 2005 Althia Kinsey - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-12-17 09:37 PM


"I do not need shine or wealth
just a pen and some paper
for my health"


I'm sure lots here will agree with you on that!

Welcome to Pip!

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2 posted 2005-12-17 10:12 PM


Tatalinia~

I can really relate to this. Welcome to the PipTalk family.

*~Kelly~*

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3 posted 2005-12-17 10:14 PM


First, what a beautiful user name!

quote:
I do not need shine or wealth
just a pen and some paper
for my health

Amen!

Check your email for a very special greeting!

Welcome to Passions!

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4 posted 2005-12-17 10:27 PM


Welcome to Passions !!
Much enjoyed your first post
Have fun here !!!
hugs, Chris

tatalinia
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5 posted 2005-12-17 10:27 PM


hey thank you guys for replying to my poem. i look forward to enjoying reading some of yours as well.


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6 posted 2005-12-17 11:28 PM


Althia~
So, your real name IS as pretty as your user ID !!!

Lovely entrance into our family circle of poetic friends~

Enjoy your stay~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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7 posted 2005-12-18 01:10 AM


Line 10

"Built me strong"

Strong writing.  I liked this one much.

poe
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8 posted 2005-12-18 01:24 AM


Excellent write. You can look at it and take it, in many a form. Yet it resinates with the fact a poets words are a poets life.
Continue the good work

poe

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

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9 posted 2005-12-18 12:40 PM


Enjoyed the read.
Welcome to Passions

:-)

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10 posted 2005-12-18 03:23 PM


nice entry into the blue. that's the attitude, only way to survive when things do their best to keep you down
Edward Grim
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11 posted 2005-12-18 03:49 PM


That is a great poem. "I do not need shine or wealth just a pen and some paper for my health", It's like you read my thoughts. It reminds me of one of my poems, I'll post it soon. Nice write! Keep "maintaining your health"! lol    - Ed Grim
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12 posted 2005-12-18 03:56 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Excellent first post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...  

tatalinia
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13 posted 2005-12-18 05:13 PM


thanks for all the responses, i look forward to puting some more of my stuff up as well as reading yours.

ALTHIA

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14 posted 2005-12-18 05:37 PM


I hope we must not take your time limit too literally.  Enjoyed your poem.

- Owl

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