The Taste Of Eden On Her Lips

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lyricpoet
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0 posted 2005-07-19 08:58 PM

The Taste Of Eden On Her Lips

I shall plead this as content that brings upon such happiness, but worlds of passion that burn from within her soul making ecstasy unreal. Forbidden as the taste of Eden on her lips.

Till my dreams explode into her globes of paradise. Forgive me for I am the gentle lover to her deliciousness. Let me take her in natures way to explore each petal of her rose.

To seed each blossom in ways no one has bloomed. Paradise has time to serve us both, for I am the giver to her needs. Let my hands be the player of her keys, to bare the fullest music of her heart.

To sip the nectar from within its most passion flower. Let me be as if to touch her in the corridors of her most sacred chapels. Climb her temple steps into the hills of her holy ground. Lose my lips in findings unknown to taste her naked soul.

Author (C) Kevin Brian Wright

MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2005-07-20 12:15 PM

Hotter than a bowl of steamed rice dowsed with Chinese mustard and pepper sauce... Ah, the "camouflage" that metaphors provide, and the revelations of the stark naked truth...

Well done, but is that the timer I hear ticking before this one gets transfered to another forum...? Well, I guess you won't know if you don't try, right?

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lyricpoet
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2 posted 2005-07-20 12:32 PM

thanks for you wonderful comments

Juju
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3 posted 2005-07-20 12:42 PM

Sigh...............

You make me melt.....

See if guys would read poetry like that to me I would be "yes I would go out with you hunk" (except if were those creepy guys) instead of "well I don't know It is really ahard and I am too busy/ not intrested." seriously. This guy would write songs to me and that made me like him over one of the most popular guys in the school. Not even that is is a song or a poem. You show a bit of you. Its like communication.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

lyricpoet
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4 posted 2005-07-20 02:47 PM

I like to put a bit of me it all of my work, i guess any artist does...! Thanks for your reply!!

lyricpoet
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5 posted 2005-07-20 03:38 PM

I don't consider this Erotica. This is just a character of a man exploring the woman he "LOVES with the warmth of intimacy. Erotica is much more graphic.

Sorry, if i caused any problems from this posting.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-07-21 01:10 AM

enjoyed....James

lyricpoet
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7 posted 2005-07-21 01:12 AM

thank you

Ratleader

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8 posted 2005-10-25 10:17 PM

Lyric.

Yes.

Yes, exactly. That is a perfect name for you, and this delicious poem....is simply lyric.

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yv
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9 posted 2005-10-26 01:13 AM

How erotic! Your words are delicious! I am so ever in love with all that you write...spellbound...always!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2005-10-26 09:26 AM

Sensually hot...

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