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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Who were we before this touch? Once traced to memory...will we hold forever the lines of our embrace? Let my arms forget you. Enter me new in every moment...merging in the emptiness of before. And only then remember. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Definitely a "sigh write". Beautifully touching as always. Happy Holidays, Eric! Helen |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ah, the enchantment of discovery...over and over again. So cool, your tender renderings. Enjoyed, TD |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Eric~ Enjoyed this... Beautifully written.  *~Kelly~* |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
damn good write ericc ~wolfman |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Eric.. To rediscover one another at each touch..beautiful. ~Let peace begin with me... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes....as you always seem to have the magic to do... *sigh* |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Brilliant Eric The touch is perfect Dave |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Magical! - Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Who were we before this touch? Or did I exist at all? *S* Others describe relationships... you give us the essence of why they are. *S* Beautiful! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nicely put, as always Eric because it is often touch that speaks much more clearly than words can even allow. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
That moment is so special, it would be so grand to be able to recreate it...over and over, again and again...Thanx Eric! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
before or after...I'll take both  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
one traced memory indeed -- beautiful words and feeling .... Merry Christmas Ericc... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A pretty gift... wrapped up in lines...  Thank you, Eric. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
nice , very nice work ericc lol i just noticed i had posted a reply before this one and it is also the title , oh well to late now ~wolfy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Merging and remembering ... Time is not an issue nor is distance. Like the stars adorning the sky you adorn me with sparks of you. There is no before when every breath brings more. Reading your words is always a new pleasure even after reading many times hundreds of your gems, dear Eric. Your poems are alive and pulsing with beauty. I love you. Margherita  |
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loved_and_redeemed Junior Member
since 2006-01-03
Posts 22BC, Canada |
Magical. This left me with the ghost of love's touch Thank you |
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