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Open Poetry #36

Can't take me down

* shining star*
Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

0 posted 2005-07-18 11:24 AM

You left me,
I moved on.
You tried to make me feel bad.
But I feel great.
If you are against thats fine.
I'm not even going to look at you.
If being ignorant makes you feel good,
then being in a great mood makes me feel good.
No matter what you do,
you will not take me down.

-Smile, it's not a sin.

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

1 posted 2005-07-18 12:29 PM

keep going and don't look back...

this is good.

lyricpoet
Member

since 2005-07-16

Posts 199
NY, USA

2 posted 2005-07-18 02:37 PM

Good job!! just keep it up!!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-07-18 06:31 PM

doesn't it feel good?

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

4 posted 2005-07-18 07:00 PM

Smiles: The best revenge!

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