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office dynamics (cinquain)

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

0 posted 2005-07-17 10:28 PM

new friends
get along well
appalling flaws revealed
I restrain from forging tight bonds
lone soul

[This message has been edited by kaile (07-18-2005 04:54 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2005-07-17 10:30 PM

did you mean forging?
foraging...a totally different thought emerges with that word
hmmm..................

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-07-17 10:32 PM

Old friends
Who value life
diminish all the flaws;
This, something I have learned, well.
Think, Love.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-07-17 10:34 PM

Kaile? Midnitesun is right - but I read "forging"....

she has a sharper eye than mine is tonight, bless her soul!

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

4 posted 2005-07-18 04:54 AM

oops, thanks for catching my errant brain-wagon

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2005-07-18 05:29 AM

wonderfully done kaile!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-07-18 01:14 PM

I do the same, its more peaceful...office politics is not my cup of tea...

wonderful images...and hugs to ya

lyricpoet
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since 2005-07-16

Posts 199
NY, USA

7 posted 2005-07-18 02:36 PM

Lovely, nice write!!

adagio
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since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

8 posted 2005-07-18 08:04 PM

Very well done, enjoyed

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