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Daddys_Girl_4ever
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since 2005-12-12
Posts 10
Mass, USA

0 posted 2005-12-14 10:46 AM


Being with you
Gives me butterflies
I rember when we were at camp
I needed a hugbut I was to shy to ask you
I liked flirting with you
I liked when we’d talk
Every morning when I’d see you at the blacktop I wanted a hug from you
When you told me that youloved me
I wanted to say I love you too
When the dance was over we started to cry
The last night at camp wasn’t fun
I was scared of not talking to you
The last day of camp
I was so sad leaving you

July 16 2005
We were all alone
We got closer to each other
You put your arms around me I did the same
After awhile you started touching my face
Then it happen we kissed
Then you asked me to marry you
I started to cry
You said ‘baby come here’
I cried in your arms

The following weekend
I came over
We took a nap together

Since I’ve been with you
You make me so happy baby
When ever I’m with you
I’m so happy

Thanks for not giving up on me

Live life like you are going to die tomorrow

© Copyright 2005 Minna Talviharju - All Rights Reserved
majnu
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1 posted 2005-12-17 12:38 PM


you express yourself well.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-12-17 12:40 PM


Such a sweet write!
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...  

Daddys_Girl_4ever
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since 2005-12-12
Posts 10
Mass, USA
3 posted 2005-12-17 02:53 PM


thanks

Live life like you are going to die tomorrow

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