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0 posted 2005-07-17 02:19 PM



Abandoned love is so full of pain,
I went through the ride,
It was more than just a game,

She came in my life,
Not a twinkle too late,
But with my last “I love you”
My beating heart stopped at bay,

Wondering tonight if love is actually true,
And then there is the hope of new love,
So serene the next time seems,
And then my heart starts once more,

But the memories of the past never fade,
What is not meant to go away haunts me-
Night and day,
And she can sense this hunger,

Without me and her left alone in this life,
Who to blame but our own lucky fate,
A love full of passion-
Lead without positive reception,

Every wish on a shooting star,
Is not fulfilled tonight,
And despair filled face,
Hides behind a fake smile.


I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2005-07-17 03:54 PM


Never fear for wishes do come true and not all smiles are fake...keep wishing and you will never know what the future will bring...*hug*

[This message has been edited by Startime55 (07-17-2005 07:38 PM).]

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-07-17 07:29 PM


understand this
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