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vandana
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0 posted 2005-07-17 11:14 AM



I have onced lived,
For this hope to come,
And here I see that is gone,
The forgotten hope,
Of our lives,
And stay the hope,
As long as we are here
Once I the song of a memory,
That I hoped to remembered,
But it did forgotten the hope,
Now all the memory of our life,
Wishing it would stay long,
Never get us wrong,
For the hope we pray,
To hear soon from us,
The hope we soon pray,
To come is still gone,
Forgotten hope,
Of our life,
Let give us the hope
for tomorrow
The forgotten hope,
Let us pray to hope,
To come,
Forgotten hope,


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-07-17 11:45 AM


vandana
Enjoyed the read.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-07-17 12:59 PM


a song of hope
a song of joy
enjoyed this, lady Vandana

Tim
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3 posted 2005-07-17 01:07 PM


very nice, enjoyed.
Startime55
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4 posted 2005-07-17 04:12 PM


May the living hope of your heart fill your life with love and joy...beautiful writing...*big hugs*

passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-07-17 07:27 PM


I always love to read you
LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-07-18 10:56 AM


using the available light pegs the designer...enjoyed this muchly
iliana
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7 posted 2005-07-19 01:24 AM


Without hope, we all would be lost.  Good thoughts!
JesusChristPose
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8 posted 2005-07-21 12:26 PM


I like the play on words with regards to an ironic quality - that is what I beleive anyway. There were a few lines I really enjoyed even better than the others. Well done! Enjoyed.
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2005-07-21 01:22 AM


Nice..James
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2005-07-21 10:57 AM


Hi, vandana! I haven't seen you around for awhile.

"Let give us the hope
for tomorrow
The forgotten hope,
Let us pray to hope,
To come,
Forgotten hope,"

~ I hope today and all your tomorrows will be filled with love and joy. You deserve it, Dear One.

Sending you a big, warm hug,
EA

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