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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Feel I feel the nearness of dismay My palette dries a coats display The light grows dimmer to my eye My hearing is a simmers fly My thoughts are smoldering with age And time has coated white the rage Though fire glows within the core A coat of snow has cooled the raw And sleep and dream now supersede The down shift of my living need To other paths dimension free Where I can see the inner me Its here I play with fantasy Green fields and love and ecstasy I drink this nectar of a kind The mellow wine of my mind Even smoothed the sea with rhyme and Illusions stop the tick time |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sir, we would never know unless you told us -- your words continue to reveal your true inner self, and that, my friend, is timeless. Enjoying each write of yours I'm able to read... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And sleep and dream now supersede The down shift of my living need To other paths dimension free Where I can see the inner me love the wording in this, Sy... hugs M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I feel the nearness of dismay My palette dries a coats display The light grows dimmer to my eye My hearing is a simmers fly My thoughts are smoldering with age And time has coated white the rage Though fire glows within the core A coat of snow has cooled the raw And sleep and dream now supersede The down shift of my living need To other paths dimension free Where I can see the inner me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ive always seen the inner you in your rhymes divine and you know how I feel.  and could this line be any cooler? My palette dries a coats display you are the Renoir of rhyme.  *ww*    Thank you clarity ... thank you frailty |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Just remember how much better wine gets with age....I find myself becoming happier the older I get because then I can see what is truly important to me...as I weave fantasies with my words I find my life is filled with joy that I can share with others....You share so much beauty and wonder with us that you help weave a vision that opens our hearts to drink of the man you truly are....thank you for quenching our thrist with the elixir of your soul....**big hugs** |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I don't know if it stops the tick of time, but maybe it makes it the back beat? I do the same, my friend, I do the same. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
My library has a new one to add with this. I think I'll join you there (in illusion land) for a cup of renewal!  ....jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My thoughts are smoldering with age And time has coated white the rage Though fire glows within the core A coat of snow has cooled the raw I love the power of these lines... My friend... you're getting better every day. *S* |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
evening sir, enjoyed as alwaysMy spirit will rise |
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