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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2005-07-17 05:25 AM

no deeper than the soul
where we will grow
among the roots
of Love's rise
... that's where hearts yearn

the desire, taken slow
as it churns so
among the flames,
Love's rose
... that's where hearts burn

"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."

If it wasn't right, wasn't real ...
then why did it make us feel ....?

[This message has been edited by ctowen (07-17-2005 12:43 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-07-17 12:21 PM

after reading this twice, I think it would read better with a comma, then "Love rose" at the end, ie, eliminate the 'has'
JMHO

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-17-2005 12:53 PM).]

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2005-07-17 12:49 PM

you are absolutely write, my friend ....

      ..... maybe too early in the morning
                  to comprehend.


           somethings we just need to sleep on ....

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2005-07-17 01:32 PM

Filled with slow burning desire...I love the vision but mostly the feel of this heart and its slow burning heat....Beautifully done, my friend...*big hugs*

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2005-07-17 03:34 PM

Consumed by the flames, blissfully burning...
Love is just like that!
*S*

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

5 posted 2005-07-17 06:27 PM

we burn only to rise from the ashes..a phoenix...enjoyed nonetheless

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-07-17 06:33 PM

Yes..love does burn..at least the passion does.
Good one Craig.
~Hugs You!~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2005-07-17 06:44 PM

Stunning write.....love it with the painting.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-07-18 11:09 AM

typical you

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2005-07-19 04:08 PM

this is wondErfully YOU!

luv ya...

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

10 posted 2005-07-19 04:23 PM

Thanks EveryonE for the read ...

   Karen  -  love to read how you feel
   TD     -  consumed by your bliss
   Cw     -  some love needs to rise from ashes to become true ...
   Nancy  -  Passion is the place!!
   Il     -  glad you enjoyed both
   mE     -  there's my cohort in heart!! ....
                 thought you were  passed over or somEthing!!

                **  ~  **

[This message has been edited by ctowen (07-19-2005 06:56 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2005-07-19 05:57 PM

Fabulous...James

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

12 posted 2005-07-19 10:01 PM

Thanks James .... Aloha!!

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