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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-07-17 01:42 AM



Missing Piece To The Puzzle

Had I overlooked something
I still could not be sure
My mind kept on searching
Back tracking I endure

Missing piece to the puzzle
Became so hard to find
As something left unfinished
Play tricks on my mind

The pieces don't seem to fit
I searched high and low
Looking for the missing clue
I have tracked to and fro

Many hints and innuendoes
Each one I had analysed
Something was still missing
It was so easily realised

Would the puzzle be solved
Maybe I delved to deep
I know the guessing games
Caused me lack of sleep

Hope ©2005
With music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/92/poem_758391.html

© Copyright 2005 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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1 posted 2005-07-17 02:12 AM


Enjoyed your poem, graphics and music.  Yep, I've had a few pieces of puzzles to find.  My latest is to fill the notes to a song I'm trying to write--it's driving me bonkers!  Thought I'd try a diversionary tactic by visiting the blue pages.  Glad I did.
Hoping that missing piece of your puzzle shows up soon.  I know it isn't any fun hunting for it.  Good luck to you.

  

          miscellanea

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-07-17 07:47 AM


understanding
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2005-07-17 08:56 AM


I hope you find the missing piece.
Startime55
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4 posted 2005-07-17 01:39 PM


I know just how you feel...I hope the missing piece will fill your puzzle with clarity....Beautifully written...*big hugs*

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2005-07-17 07:02 PM


Damn those missing pieces!
HOPE you will find the one you are looking for.

HopeS
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6 posted 2005-07-18 01:34 AM


Thank you so much for your kind , understanding replies , by the way Midnitesun , the person with those missing pieces lives in Oregon , perhaps I should give you his address you can get him to return them LOL

Hope

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-07-19 12:03 PM


Enjoyed...James
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8 posted 2005-07-19 01:01 AM


Don't encourage Kacy Hope!  She's liable to go take those pieces out of his hide

Darn it all anyways!  Men!

~* Carpe' Diem *~
Tis only in their dreams that men truly be free, 'twas always thus and always will be. ~ Keating


iliana
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9 posted 2005-07-19 01:18 AM


Good analogy.  I wrote a puzzle poem at the end of my first marriage....reminds me of those feelings.           ....jo  
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