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lyricpoet
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0 posted 2005-07-16 11:59 AM


She sees all that is beneath Elysian fields, and embraces the ends of the earth  with the hands of God. Her  spiritual splendor is clothed in garments of passion and will enlighten my heart to love;

Until heavens days have passed away. She descends me into her lovely face. Where her scarlet rose lips rest below her ebony hair and sable eyebrows, careering my soul with her beautiful hands of pearl.

Even the moon glows not as bright,  the sun is powerless and the stars fall unclear. When she made rule with the skies and the path of lighting that gives radiance to her eyes.    

Her beauty is born of the wind by the breath of earth and the famed waves of the sea. That roll forth with tender works of immortal sweetness.

© Copyright 2005 Kevin Brian Wright - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-16 12:12 PM


Lovely writing. Nice to read your words. Welcome to Pips. I hope you enjoy your time in the pages of blue.
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2 posted 2005-07-16 12:12 PM


Kevin~

Welcome!  This is so vivid and beautiful....
we are glad that you have joined us, and hope you enjoy your stay....

please check your email for a special greeting from all here at passions

Greeneyes~


In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

lyricpoet
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3 posted 2005-07-16 12:15 PM


Thank you for you kind words and your warm welcome to your forum. I'm glad to be aboard...!
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with you
4 posted 2005-07-16 12:16 PM


Welcome to Pip, I really enjoyed this
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5 posted 2005-07-16 12:17 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Much enjoyed your debut post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

lyricpoet
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6 posted 2005-07-16 12:19 PM


Thank you a much appreciated welcome! Happy to be here!!
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7 posted 2005-07-16 12:23 PM


Welcome!! I must admit this was beautiful, warms me up on this dreary rainy day..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

lyricpoet
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8 posted 2005-07-16 03:27 PM


Thank you for your thoughts on my work.
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9 posted 2005-07-16 09:23 PM


I lift my glass to a remarkable toast and tribute.

I very much enjoyed.

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10 posted 2005-07-16 09:51 PM


Welcome to Passions, Kevin!  We hope that you will find many ways in which to express yourself within our blue walls...

If you have any questions, just contact a moderator. We are here to help you become comfortable and feel right at home!

lyricpoet
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11 posted 2005-07-16 10:02 PM


Thank you serenity blaze for your comment..!

lyricpoet
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12 posted 2005-07-16 10:03 PM


Sunshine, I appreciate you welcoming me to  Passions. It is a pleasure being a aboard..!

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13 posted 2005-07-16 11:10 PM


these eyes of yours have gifted us a beautiful portrait!
WELCOME to Pips!

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14 posted 2005-07-16 11:13 PM


Beautiful and Welcome!!

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

lyricpoet
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15 posted 2005-07-16 11:38 PM


Thank you both so very much for your replies.!
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16 posted 2005-07-17 12:33 PM


Nice...James
lyricpoet
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17 posted 2005-07-17 07:16 AM


Thanks James
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18 posted 2005-07-17 07:53 AM


how precious this is

welcome to Passions

lyricpoet
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19 posted 2005-07-17 08:05 AM


Thank you very much for your thoughts!!!
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20 posted 2005-07-17 11:01 AM


welcome to passions good read
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welcome.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

lyricpoet
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22 posted 2005-07-17 05:17 PM


thank u
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23 posted 2005-07-18 02:23 PM


Welcome to Passions !!!
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bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

lyricpoet
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24 posted 2005-07-18 02:32 PM


Thank you very much, i'm happy to be here!
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25 posted 2005-07-18 05:33 PM


Welcome to PIP.  I see the beauty!
lyricpoet
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26 posted 2005-07-18 05:40 PM


Thank you!!
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27 posted 2005-07-18 05:47 PM


Kevin-
This is a great write... one that I wish I wre able to have done.
Welcome to our little family. I think you'll enjoy your stay.

http://www.mysticwicks.com
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the after dark section)

lyricpoet
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28 posted 2005-07-18 06:02 PM


Thank for your comment and for welcoming me to Passions.
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29 posted 2005-07-18 06:26 PM


Sounds like a lovely lady ,luckey to know her

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30 posted 2005-07-18 06:59 PM


Hello and welcome to Passions In Poetry.

This is such a beautfiul poem. I especially  like the last verse.......

Her beauty is born of the wind by the breath of earth and the famed waves of the sea. That roll forth with tender works of immortal sweetness.

I hope you enjoy your time at PIP.
Hugs,
Ethel GG

lyricpoet
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31 posted 2005-07-18 08:47 PM


thank you
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