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A Poet picking
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A Poet picking |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I pick the flowers One at a time, Arranging them in my hand As if were the vase, And hold them at arms length On the table I imagine As if in the vase. My garden hold but a few Mostly yellow and red hue, But in have snuck some pink, But I have traded some for other things Plants that tomato and peppers brings, To make a summer salad soon. Yet what of the follows picked To last three days or so Then they’ll brown And away they’ll go, But lasting longer than the pepper Or the tomato. Gloom Inspired by of poet in a potter's field |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
I really enjoyed this read, well composed and a smooth flow. Nicely done...! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 well done |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loving the scent of this handful, and the inspiration |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I liked it too |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed the follow up.  ....jo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling... I love to watch a garden grow, and thank you, Prof, for picking this up. I apologize for my tardiness, but sometimes the poet is picked "on"!  (meaning my realtime life got ahead of my Piptime)But thanks so much, for the lovely blossoms, and special thanks to a special friend, for pointing out the path through.... Hugs and love, and hey? thyme suits ya  |
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