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Dusk

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Huan Yi
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And when one looks back
Into the shadows
Butterflies
In summer meadows
Peace signs
Earth shoes
And faded jeans
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-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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I think I'll drag out my old faded jeans now
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~~remembering~~


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All my jeans are faded.
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My old jeans are faded too, and I can't seem to give up my 'earth shoes', holes or not!!  This is a great write, and I enjoyed it tremendously....~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

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"And when one looks back
Into the shadows"
I may have to think about this for the rest of my life.
whose shadows?
how one can look into the shadows?
butter fly has shadow
but Peace signs?

still puzzling!
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