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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2005-07-14 10:47 PM


Time is such a delicate thing,
It’s something that is hard to understand,
It’s not even an object to hold so I’m told.

I on the other hand don’t believe that’s true,
Time is such a complicated thing,
But yet it is a beautiful thing,

Time is on my side because I can graduate with all my friends.
Time is on my side because I will get to experience the real world for
what it really is.
Time is on my side because it isn’t my time to die.

Can you count the endless movement of time?
No, time is something that I live my life by.

Today I feel that time has just stopped,
And because of this I’ve become breathless,
Time is so essential that I can’t even dream of being myself without it.

Time is on my side because I can graduate with all my friends.
Time is on my side because I will get to experience the real world for
what it really is.
Time is on my side because it isn’t my time to die.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2005 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-19 11:09 PM


That's the bottom line.....I'm not ok, things around me are falling down, but....time is on my side -- just look at all of 'em that I've outlived, and none of 'em has done me in yet....so I have time, and really, what would I trade that for?

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2 posted 2005-07-19 11:15 PM


agree with Ed
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3 posted 2005-07-20 08:03 PM


Beautiful language...powerfuly told.

Eric

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4 posted 2005-07-20 08:43 PM



and since it's your birthday today,
time IS on your side m'dear.

Happy 22!

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