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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2005-07-14 09:59 PM


Everything feels like it’s crashing down on me.
Is there a purpose for all of this, is this done so that I can’t see?
I don’t know if I can clean up the mess myself.
Where am I supposed to turn for help?

Shattered pieces are like a puzzle that is hard to put back together
the same way before it broke.
Does that mean I’ll never understand how to put it together again?
Or is just an old fashioned bad joke?

Some people say that life is too easy or some say too hard.
Does that mean that people think life is just a game of cards?
If so what do you do, how do you play?
Although maybe to play there is a large price to pay?

Shattered pieces are like a puzzle that is hard to put back together
the same way before it broke.
Does that mean I’ll never understand how to put it together again?
Or is just an old fashioned bad joke?

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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1 posted 2005-07-19 01:44 AM


"Shattered pieces are like a puzzle that is hard to put back together
the same way before it broke."


maybe sometimes, it isn't supposed to be/look the same....maybe all it is about, is change.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-07-19 07:23 AM


Many good questions to ponder...loosing control of our life sets us off kilter, leaving us to ponder...and it is in those times, when friends perhaps can help us through, as they are objective and perhaps may have some very helpful views...

Hugs to you for this...

HopeS
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3 posted 2005-07-19 10:29 AM


I can relate to those feelings you expressed , I recently posted a poem titled "Missing Piece To The Puzzle

Hope  

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4 posted 2005-07-19 10:40 AM


Oh, my! I just posted a poem that would appear as though it were written in response to your poem!

I do believe that in our trying to put the pieces of our life puzzle back together again, we could end up with an even better picture!

Hang in there darlin'! As Little Orphan Annie sang, "The sun will come out tomorrow!" ~ and guess what? She was right! It always does!

Sending you a great big healing hug,
EA

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