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louise New Member
since 2005-07-14
Posts 8 |
Suction cup hands dancing and taunting Drawing, drawing me in. Smiling faces waving and wanting Drawing, drawing me in. Greed, O, Greed, how they worship your every desire! How you devour humanity! How you slay the world! Proletariats dancing round office buildings dare not speak your name. Mighty Greed, I will address you and Bring you out from behind the concrete and blue and into the realm of the living. Snake charmers play their soothing flutes Drawing, drawing me in. Transparent men in business suits Drawing, drawing me in. Money, O, Money, how you strip our Earth clean of real wealth! How you devour forests! How you rape the world! Stock Brokers sing your praises, exalting you, screaming your name. Feeble Money, I will denounce you and Bring you out from behind the corporations in blue and into the realm of the living. Grinding death factories go up smoke Drawing, drawing me in. Shining televisions tell another joke Drawing, drawing me in. |
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BeWitched Junior Member
since 2005-07-06
Posts 31 |
This is interesting a powerful penning. Welcome.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed this one WELCOME! and may the Proles awaken worldwide |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very interesting, and I like the rhythm to it and the repetition of "drawing, drawing me in." Welcome to PIP! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome to Pip  Please check your email for a special greeting! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to Passions! good write here |
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louise New Member
since 2005-07-14
Posts 8 |
Thank you all for taking the time to read my poetry. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Louise~ Welcome, welcome to the blue pages of Passions In Poetry~ Enjoyed the ponder of this piece~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Louise! I do believe we'll come to enjoy your poetry very much! I hope that you will find our members' poetry just as enjoyable! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more of your words. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions.. Much enjoyed your debut post. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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