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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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the moon bends toward the death of day it plays the night, you, and then me it circles its white garments and talks to us in silence (((like oceans swarming))) to then gallop into waves crashing i weigh it with my arms drink the twilight, and its reflection in your eyes O heaven-ly one i see the silent dreams i see them hanging in the trees soft and pulpy ready to harvest |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i weigh it with my arms drink the twilight, and its reflection in your eyes pure poetry  wow!!! ~wolfman |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
i weigh it with my arms drink the twilight, and its reflection in your eyes Darn Bella! WOW is right, I agree with wolfie. Fantastic, this write is. seek the flame within yourself |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
deeeelightful read....as pretty as your smile...enjoyed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes!! a harvest beneath her heavenly glow, even a tainted goddess wears a golden halo. hugs M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I do savor the term of oceans swarming and imagine how the ocean's swarming might feel on the skin of the shore enjoyed your work ms D |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree "O heaven-ly one i see the silent dreams i see them hanging in the trees soft and pulpy ready to harvest" As always, you imagery just sweeps me away!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Maree... You continue to leave me speechless! This is exquisite! Hugs~Nancy ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel+ Absitively, posolutely GORGEOUS~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
wow. bella this is absolutely breathtaking  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
It IS breathtaking . . . it made me feel like the entire Earth was billowy and alive. You do that when you write, you know? Make the Earth speak, Maree. |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
I've always loved your work, Dark Angel. You have a way of creating a lush world with just your word sketches. Very lovely. And so are you. Nice picture. "The moon ain't romantic, it's intimidating as hell". -- Tom Waits, 'Bad Live and a Broken Heart' |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oceans swarming vivid and a powerful image gorgeous one I love that much, because, I happen to know, there's a certain amount of atmospheric pressure when things like that happen, and oh how apt a visual for intensity |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*whew* I loved this!!! so completely beautiful (and btw so is your new pic!) |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Friggin' brilliant! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wolfman..pure? no way! Poetry? hmmm..I try. Thankn you *smile* Bella, Thank you HUGS LeeJ, you are so sweet, I thank you. Ms Michelle, I lerve your poetic replies. Thank you. Mr D... and imagine how the ocean's swarming might feel on the skin of the shore smiling and thank you Martie, as long as it don't sweep you away too far Honeusuckle. KISS Nancy, awww I don't mean to. HUGS and Thank YOU. Marge, thank you *smile* Bello, ahhh to take your breath away. *Smile* m'Exotic God.  ty.Lil Susie, make the earth speak? hmmm I'll try *smile* Thank you. soul drifter, thank you for yuor lovely comments and compliment. M'lady ....thank you and HUGS Ahhh SEA, it's always lovely to see you here, to feel your blue touch. Thank you. Kaoru...Meg? Indeed YOU are! Thanks. xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more ~Neruda~ |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
As God is my witness, you are more poetic than Sylvia, more real than an eclipse of the sun. Great writing, Maree! Billy 8) "Only the dead, haveeee seen the end of war." |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Somehow Chinese |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What pictures....portraits... you paint these so well... and I am in awe... but we both know that is normal, of me, of your writing.... Merry Christmas, little one! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellnt leading thoughts and a great format. Captive read! Eric |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hiya sweetie loved this, excellent flow and imagery...Bravo! ~hugs~  Love is the life of the soul... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Simply exquisite. Words that induce a SIGH of awe. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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