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Open Poetry #36

You and Me

RobinsbigmanRick
New Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 6

0 posted 2005-07-13 08:33 PM

I love you more,
Than you will ever know,
Even on the days,
That my love may not show.
Your my wings,
When I need to fly,
Your my star,
That shines in the sky,
Your there when I need you,
Whether rain or shine,
I am glad I can say,
That your finally mine.
We may have our problems,
But we will sort them out,
Working out our problems,
Is what a relationship is all about.
I am here for you,
In good and in bad,
You can talk to me,
When you are happy or sad.
I will love you more,
As each day passes by,
And the day I stop loving you,
Is the day that I die.......... "For the love of my Life"

[This message has been edited by RobinsbigmanRick (07-13-2005 09:28 PM).]

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2005-07-13 09:23 PM

Now I know it was a typo but I loved this,

quote:
Your my star,
That shines in the shy

Many people are shy and their significant other makes them shine. So many times the one that gives us the wings to fly is only really giving us a gentle little push. This is a very lovely poem to show your love. Nicely done.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

RobinsbigmanRick
New Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 6

2 posted 2005-07-14 05:26 PM

Thank you for your comments on my poem, Robin truely is the love of my life and i am proud for the whole world to know she is my true love...... Rick

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