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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-07-13 07:36 AM


from the velvet window's eye
you mingle the nectar's breath
and speak of whispered pleasures

where is your song of ginseng
when you lean your morning
to fill the eyes of manday crave

when the tan of your seduction
stirs the wishful candy thinking
into a luxor mind's unwrapping

the mirrors know your eyes
when they are but pixie promises
and the dark faerie sways her sin

from a shoulder's edge projection
_______________

dark

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MGROVES
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1 posted 2005-07-13 07:42 AM


My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-07-13 07:47 AM


Pixie promises...
now this leaves a smile!

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-07-13 08:20 AM


Pixie Promises got my eyes as well....

" Character - the willingness to accept responsibility for one's own life - is the source from which self respect springs." - Joan Didion


you have painted a picture which I'm sorry to say, holds so true in today's world...more then not...

Hugs to you and Good Morning

Susan
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4 posted 2005-07-13 10:40 AM


Guess I am not catching the truth of this one for I do not feel sad, but a sense of wistfulness - yet am captured by the words ne're the less - and your skill at creating beauty upon page -

S

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with you
5 posted 2005-07-13 11:42 AM


"the mirrors know your eyes
when they are but pixie promises
and the dark faerie sways her sin

from a shoulder's edge projection"





love it...

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