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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-07-13 12:39 PM


Long Before Heartbreak

Letting me down slow
The fading gradually
Noting those changes
Of how you used to be

Loving communication
Became much less
No reasons were given
I had been left to guess

In the shock aftermath
My gut felt the twist
Hurt by the realization
Knowing you still exist

Love that tasted sweet
Had left a bitter taste
Among broken threads
My heart was encased

Into a downward spiral
Despair in the wake
I have felt the descent
Long before heartbreak


HopeĀ©2005
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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-07-13 05:10 AM


There is pain...but bravely written...thanks for your expression...

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2005-07-13 03:22 PM


I think we always know it's coming, even if we don't admit it.  I enjoyed this one.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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